please est ce que vous pouvez me corriger les fautes d´anglais !

je supppose qu´il y en a bcp j´en ai besoin pour demain siou plait ! !

Sujet : If your parents disapproved of your choice of a career how would you react? Would you change your plans?

Nowaday, to have a good choice for future it is very important. To make a sucess of his social and professional life is essential, but how make the good choice for future career when you have eighteen, when you don´t know what you want to be later? So parnets can orientate the choice of his son but don´t choose instead of his.

Maybe, a boy or a girl choose to do a career for his future but parents disapproved of his choice. Personaly I think parents can not choose instead of children but they can help and orientate his choice. If my parents disapproved my choice of a career, I think I would try to convince them. In fact, it´s possible that my parents don´t understand my choice because it can be unrealizable or tpp hard for me. Besides all depend to the react of parents: if they are very opposing to my choice, if they are narrow mind, I think I would not change their mind and convince them. But if they are understanding, I think I would convince them and explain and defend my choice. Furthermore, Parents are wiser than teenagers that´s why it´s necessary to listen to them.

However, if my parents disapproved of my choice and if his choice is feasible and considered, I think I would not change my plans. In fact, I think it´s necessary, for children, to do that they want particulary for their futur professional life. It´s better to do studies and relize that it´s harder and change way than make a job who don´t like and regret to don´t make an other job.

To conclude I think the role of parnets is to help children but not chosse instead of his. Besides if you want obviously to do a job, it´s necessary to try even if you run aground, but it should not regrett all the life a job who would be make.

Je pourrai te corriger si tu mets la traduction en français

arf heu dsl je l´ai fait comme sa !

moi c´est juste les fautes de grammaires !

Nowadays, to have a good choice for the future it is very important. To make a sucess of his social and professional life is essential, but how to make the good choice for future career when you are eighteen, when you don´t know what you want to be later? So parents can orientate the choice of their son but don´t choose instead of him.

Maybe, boys and girls choose to do a career for their future but parents disapproved their choices. Personaly I think parents can not choose instead of children but they can help and orientate their choices. If my parents disapproved my choice for my career, I think I would try to convince them. In fact, it´s possible that my parents don´t understand my choice because it can be unrealizable or too hard for me. Besides everything depend on the reaction of parents: if they are very opposed to my choice, if they are narrow minded, I think I would not change their mind and convince them. But if they are understanding, I think I would convince them and explain and defend my choices. Furthermore, parents are wiser than teenagers that´s why it´s necessary to listen to them.

However, if my parents disapproved my choice and if this choice is feasible and considered, I think I would not change my plans. In fact, I think it´s necessary, for children, to do that they want particulary for their future professional life. It´s better to do studies and realize that it´s too hard and to change his way than make a job will you won´t like and regret to don´t make an other job.

In order to conclude I think the role of parents is to help children but not choose instead of them. Besides if you want obviously to do a job, it´s necessary to try even if you run around, but it should not regret all the life a job who would be make. ( ta dernière phrase est étrange)

ezn faite pour la derniere phrase je voulais dire

" mais ne pas regretter toute sa vie un travail qu´on aurai pu faire"

merci bcp vulk1 !

" but do not regret all his life long a job that you could have done"

" all your life long", c mieux ; )

merci bcp ! !