Salut!
Je dois faire un texte en anglais voilà le sujet:
" Do you know any other people who have become heroes? Describe their activities"
Le texte doit faire +/- 150 mots. Alors voilà ce que j´ai fais:

" For me the only heroes whom I they know are the firemen! The every day, with nobody what time of the day, they answer present to come to the assistances of the people who are in difficulties. They are people extraordinary! They are ready to give their lives to come you to assistance and that it´s something of formidable. They training all times! To have an irreproachable physical form and thus to be able to be ready to intervene in critical cases. They have a trade lasts, then what they must face death the every day but also their life social which is very reduced. But too leaves they have poor wages to compare with their works they provide but as firemen say it: " It´s our passion which makes that we likes this job". This trade is to regard as a trade at the risk. They are always there in the event of problems. For me, I regard them as guardian angels."

Merci de m´aider

dis, tu as pris le traducteur d´un site pour faire ça, nan? parce que c´est pas vraiment comprehensible ton truc là ^^

for me the only heroes whom I they know are the firemen!

> As far as I´m concerned, the only heroes I know are firemen!

The every day, with nobody what time of the day, they answer present to come to the assistances of the people who are in difficulties.

> tu veux dire quoi par the every day? ya Nowadays pour dire de nos jours(bien apprécié des profs en général), le groupe entre virgule, je ne pige pas, " they answer present" je sais pas si ça se dit comme ça ^^´ to come so as to helping people in difficulty.

They are people extraordinary!

>They are extraordinary men!

They are ready to give their lives to come you to assistance and that it´s something of formidable.

> They are ready to give you their lives if you are in danger and that is fantastic.

They ARE training all THE time!

To have an irreproachable physical form and thus to be able to be ready to intervene in critical cases.

>>In order to have an irreproachable physical strength and thus to be able to intervene in case of emergency

je fais la suite plus tard

merci sinon pour " every day" je voulais dire TOUS LES JOURS
je te remercie

oui every day veut dire totu les jours, yaaussi all day, ca veut dire un truc différent j´ai oublié

They have a trade lasts, then what they must face death the every day but also their life social which is very reduced. But too leaves they have poor wages to compare with their works they provide but as firemen say it: "  It´s our passion which makes that we likes this job". This trade is to regard as a trade at the risk. They are always there in the event of problems. For me, I regard them as guardian angels.

je pige pas " they have a trade lasts", then what they must face is death every day also their social life is very reduced. But some of them leave this job as their wage is too low compared to the work they provide, but a fireman said this: " It´s our passion that makes us like this job". ? ?? . The are always there in the mean time of the problems. From my point of view, I see them as guardian angels.

euh voila, j´ai fait de mon mieux, j´espere que ça t´as aidé, ceci dit il me reste encore deux trois choses que j´ai pas saisie ^^´

Si tu remplace " for me" par " on my mind" ca passera mieux à mon avis

Every day ça veut bien dire tous les jours mais dans le sens de chaque jour

All days ca veut aussi dire tous les jours mais tu insiste sur l´ensemble, la totalité

Bon je sais c´est dur à explquer...

Salut,
Je vous remercie de m´avoir aidé!
@ Galein: la où tu as mis les ? je voulais dire que: " ce métier est considérer comme un métier dure et qui comporte des risques"
Sinon je vais voir avec mes parents pour le reste encore merci