salut je suis en seconde et j´avais une petite rédac de 60 mots à faire ( je suis oas très fort ) Pouvez vous me corriger les éventuelles erreurs ? :
The football is a team game played the foot with a round ball and setting 2 teams of 11 players. He is practised by 80 million persons in the world! The world cup is with the Olympic Games the most important global sports évenement. In everything countries there are championships and cups . Parfois victim of the popularity, he entraine excesses!

team game played WITH feets non ? chuis pas sur dsl
in EVERY country
parfois ^^ sometimes ?

entraine train

jcroi ke c practised by 80 millions OF persons.

ok merci dans la 1er pahrase je veux dire que :
le football est un sport d´équipes joué au pied avec un ballon et opposant 2 équipes de 11 joueurs .
Quelqu´un pourrait me la traduire correctement ?

The football is a team sport who´s played with the feet and . ..
la fin je sais pas...

c´est bourré de fautes
si tu repostes je veux bien t´aider.

The football is a team game played the foot with a round ball and setting 2 teams of 11 players. He is practised by 80 million persons in the world! The world cup is with the Olympic Games the most important global sports évenement. In everything countries there are championships and cups . Sometimes victim of the popularity, he trains excesses!

voilà j´ai essayé de corriger des fautes ! pouvez vous m´aider svp ?

Football is a team´s game played with the feet and a ball and sets 2 teams of 11 players. It is practised by 80 millions persons in the world! The world cup is with the Olympic Games the most important global sports evenement. In everything countries there are championships and cups . Sometimes victim of the popularity, it trains excesses!

Je pense qu´il y a encore des fautes mais c´est déjà mieux.

c mieux celle de diddo mais c
80 million persons ( million = invariable)
the world cup is, besides the Olimpic games, . ..the most important sport event.
In every country there are...
Sometimes... it gives way to/ it generates/ excesses

Je savais pas que million était invariable

Everything country... comment j´ai pu laisser passer ça