j´dois en rendre une pour jeudi qui arrive. Aidez-moi SVP.

Le sujet est :

On your Own

Describe your ideal environement in the future. You can integrate some of the advances mentioned above but feel free to imagine anything you would find particulary convenient ! ( 150-200 words)

desole vieux cé pas de mon niveau...
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tu peux dire " pollution will disparaited", Cars will fly et tout ( pollution disparé, voitures qui vole!) tu peux imaginer dotre connerie L sen fou de ce ke tu met, tant kil ya po trop de fotes d´orthogrpahe! allé @+

I imagine a future with flying cars, where pollution won´t exist and where we´ll free to do everything we want, without war, where the peace will reign at all the street corner, where all will be free and plentiful in all the shops. I wish a world where toil won´t exist, where child labour will abolish and where all the country will be at the same social level or maybe where the country will be gather in only one. I also imagine a life where we´ll travel around the universe, to visit Mars or Venus...Althought I know it´ll be impossible, but, we don´t know...I hope this will be a world without politic and laws and of course a world without delinquency in spite of laws´ absence. In short, I wish an utopian world.

Voili voilou...une quinzaine de minutes...

tu fais comme tu le sens, je pense quand meêm pas qu´il y ait le nombre de mots demandé...mais c´est déjà ça

j´attend vulk pour qu´il me corrige ^^

Mon grand ( très grand, gééééééant vert) me dis que c bourré de fautes de tournures ^^ pas d´orthographes ^^il vient de ce pas les corrigers ^^

I can imagine a future with some flying cars, where pollution won´t exist and where you´ll be free to do everything you want, without any war, where peace will reign at every street corners, where everything will be free and plentiful in every shops. I can imagine a world where toil won´t exist, where child labour will be abolished and where every countries will be equal at the social ladder or maybe every men on Earth could belong to the same country, the country of Earth. I can also imagine a life where you´ll be able to travel all around the universe, to visit Mars or Venus...Althought I know it seems impossible, but, you don´t know...I hope this will be a world without any policy and any laws and of course a world without delinquency in spite of the absence of laws. In order to conclude, I could say that what I wish is an utopian world.

Voila la correction(ajax evite les dicos foireux, où les sites de traduction de daube)

Héhé, c´est pas QUE mon dico ( bein que ce fumier soit aussi dans le coup ^^) c´est aussi du à mes connaissances un ti peux foireuses, et aussi au fait qu´eminem tourne en boucle dans mes oreilles depuis 1h...

Merki Vulkos ^^

alala, ce Jax...c´est un fauteur d´anglais...

Merci les gars, j´vous remercie tous pour votre aide, c´était très sympa.