day 3 of my travel across africa is over, i left an amzing day whos is probably the better dat since the begining of my travel.
I saw an elephant, it was a female with some babys.
I dream all nights i live in africe, it must be funny.
It was very hot when we were in the car whereas it must be cold if we climbedthe mount Kilimandjaro. It s the highest pick in Africa.

Voila je devais faire une ptit redac ou je devais raconter le jour d un mec ( 80 mots). dites moi juste si vo voyes des fautes, ce serait cool :D merci d avance

Correction: Note je te corrige les fautes d´expression et de grammaire ! !
My third day of travel across Africa is over, I left an amazing day behind who was probably the best since the begining of my travel.
Firstly, i dreamt all night I lived in Africa: it must be funny !
In the morning, I saw an elephant, it was a female with some babies.
In the afternoon, we drove for about 2 hours, it was very hot to Mt Kilimanjaro. We walked to base camp.It was very cold.

J´ai en fait refait ta redaction en un recit un peu + cohérent ( on grimpe po le kilimangaro en 1 jour ! !!)

Merde j´ai fait une faute attend je corrige ! !

My third day of travel across Africa is over, I left an amazing day behind who was probably the best since the begining of my travel.
Firstly, i dreamt all night I lived in Africa: it must be funny !
In the morning, I saw an elephant, it was a female with some babies.
In the afternoon, we drove for about 2 hours to Mt Kilimanjaro and we were very hot. We walked to base camp for another 2 hours.It was very cold.

merci beaucoup, si je pouvais jte ferait plein de bisous mais je peus pas :D