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Un petit correcteur d'anglais?

yamo_chie
yamo_chie
Niveau 8
13 octobre 2003 à 18:07:00

Vous pouvez me corriger ca :
" He was born in 1882 at Hyde Park in New York. On St. Patrick´s Day, 1905, he married Eleanor Roosevelt. Following the example of his fifth cousin, President Theodore Roosevelt, whom he greatly admired, Franklin D. Roosevelt entered public service through politics, but as a Democrat. He won election to the New York Senate in 1910. President Wilson appointed him Assistant Secretary of the Navy, and he was the Democratic nominee for Vice President in 1920. He was the president of the united states from 1933 to 1945. He saved the United states of the Depression. His politic was “the New-Deal“, they were about 13,000,000 unemployed and every bank was closed. The World War 2 made rich the united states, because the allies had to paid weapon. He engaged the United States in the World War2 after the Pearl Harbor’s attacks. He attacked severely the Germany and the Japan. He met several times the person which is link with him like Churchill, Staline, Yalta. During the war, he thought about the atomic bomb. He was the creator of the ONU. He was dead one day before the victory of the France ( in april)."

Merci d´avance^^

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