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Archaeology is the study of ancient things. I, today´s world, many scientists are searching the world over for relics of the past. That´s why we´ll study to what extent can archaeology be exciting. On the one hand, we´ll see what is so interesting in archaeology, and on the other hand, we´ll see the drawbacks of this " job"

First, I think that what is really stimulating in searching fot items from the past, is that we learn a lot of things about our origins. Not only about our origins, but also about earth origins ans oceans origins, such as howt he ancient world worked,to have a view about the main differences between us and them and see how the progress is interesting, and to make some theory about their standard of living.
Besides, I suppose that it must be a very difficult job when we see, by example, the Egyptian pyramids. They are so fascinating ! In my opinion, I believe that it was not very easy fot the archaeologists to unearth them... And not to mention the bones which enable to reconstituate the skeletons of the dinosaurs! For all these reasons, I thiknk that archaeology is very exciting and interesting.

Nevertheless, Archaeology is a very expensive work. Indeed, the scientist must travel all around the world. What´s more, they also need machines and men for the excavations. That is all the more important as they are not sure to find something !
And even if they finally find something, they are not sure to succeed in using it for a skeleton´s reconstitution by example.I think also that it must be a very difficult and tiring job because they must clean the items before use them.
In addition, the archaeologists don´t earn their living as well as we tought....

All things considered, I think archaeology is the best link between the current world and the past. Although it is a very expensive work, what it brings in compensation is not valuable. anyway, the expensive side of the archaeology is not our business after all !

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Archaeology is the study of ancient things( bof kom mot trouve otre chose). NOWADAYS(=de nos jours), many scientists are searching ALL OVER THE WORLD for relics of the past

Bon, je ne suis pas un pro en anglais, mais je ferais bien quelques remarques :

" ´ll " évites les contractions à l´écrit

" the progress " c´est pas indénombrable par hasard ?

" their standard of living" : heu ? ? T´es sûr qu´ils cherchent à connaître leur niveau de vie et pas plutôt leurs conditions de vie ?

" In my opinion, I believe " : si c´est ton opinion, c´est que c´est toi qui penses quelque chose : répétition, " I believe " à virer je pense.

" Indeed" quelle est pour toi la traduction de indeed, parce que là je ne suis pas le sens de la phrase

" earn their living " : ça se dit ?

Ah au fait, il y a une expressions-type par phrase ( all the more, indeed, what´s more... ) . Je trouve que ça fait un peu accumulation, que tu sembles ne pas détailler tes idées, puisque chaque idée fait une seule phrase.

merci deja

alors Indeed ça veut dire en effet.

g mi earn their living car dans le dico ils mettent ke l´expression pour gagner sa vie c"to earn one´s living".....

sinon merci bcp pour le reste

bin...slt chuis la soeur de ratekorio(c une merde)et puis chuis la pro de langlais ! !!! ton texte est magnifique!!!!hihi enfin je crois...g pas lu ms bon...

ha ha.....merci bcp...