Voilà,j´écris des paroles de chansons,et je voulais savoir ce que vs en pensiez.

When the morning is here,
There is so men who make up,
And the sun is me,
Cause I am a Lowboy,
In my life there isn´t any cowboy,
And i sing for you,

HOOOO THE SUN IS ME
IT´S A GREAT DAY
THE SUN IS HERE
AND IT´S MY DAY

( piccolo derrière)
When the night is cloudy,
I have to stay in my bed,
And i am not happy,
Cause there isn´t any nightingales,
who is loving to sing for me.

HOOOO IT´S A SAD DAY
THE NIGHTINGALES ARE SLEEPING
HOOO IT´S A BAD DAY
BECAUSE THE LOVE IS FIGHTING

Dites moi ce que vs en pensez stp.

C´est assez court, c´est de la " poésie" basique, mais j´ai vu bien pire...

Bah c´est super basique...
Mais pourquoi t´ecris pas en français ?

c´est euh... ça, euh... ça a du charme... hum.

fake!