Voila demain j´ai une expression orale en anglais et je né personne à qui demander pour corriger ce texte ! Pourriez vous le corriger ? Merci

PS : si c possible copier/coller le texte et changer lé erreur ! Merci et encore désolé !

Texte : We were in May .Jane Eyre was not very happy because the feeding was disgusting and the school was very strict but she preferred the orphanage at the Reed’s house. Lowood was in the content of a valley and that help at the apparition of the neightbourhood. This neighbourhood transported a lot of illnesses and the school was contamined. A lot of student were ill whose Helen . Her best friend. A day, she went to Miss Temple , the principal, to put a question. How is Helen ? The principal say what he was very sick but Jane didn’t can to speak with her friend. Jane had a lot of question. So, Jane went to the nurse to know where is Helen. She answered what she was in the Miss Temple’s room. So the next night, she crossed all the school to go to Helen. Her best friend was on her bed. She met his friend and they spoke a lot of time together . Helen said what she was going to die but Jane didn’t understand of what she spoke. They spoke a lot of time and Jane fall asleep in the bed’s Helen . At the morning , Jane awoke and Helen was dead. The illness had killed his girlfriend. So, Jane felt alone but he had always her friend Miss Temple who was the last person at who she could speak.

She was very exited to leave her school. She packed her bags and she had left at four o’clock Lowood. She arrived at Milcott at eight o’clock en the evening of the same day. That was a little industrial town . She took a bedroom in a hotel . The next day, she met a man who waited her to go to the Fairfax’s house. Fairfax was her new employer. She lived in Thornfield. During the way, she was afraid to understand a woman like Mme Reed who was very rich but who wasn’t sympathetic with her. She arrived at the Fairfax’s House and she saw a very beautiful house. She understand Mme Fairfax in a beautiful and comfortable bedroom. Mme Fairfax was smiling and she looks to Jane . Jane understood a very sympathetic woman. She was old, rich and very friendly. Jane will be the teacher of a student but she wasn’t of the Fairfax’ family .

Il est fou lui^^

lol comme si l´Anglais sa nous pétait pas assez les c**** comme sa, faut en plus qu´on fasse celui des autres

oh le ouf

Texte : We were taggeule .Jane Eyre was not very salope because the pédé was disgusting and the school was very sex but she preferred the sring at the Reed’s house. Lowood was in the content of a valley and that help at the apparition of the neightbourhood. This neighbourhood transported a lot of illnesses and the school was contamined. A lot of student were ill whose Helen . Her best friend. A day, she went to Miss Temple , the principal, to put a question. How is Helen ? The principal say what he was very sick but Jane didn’t can to speak with her friend. Jane had a lot of question. So, Jane went to the nurse to know where is Helen. She answered what she was in the Miss Temple’s room. So the next night, she crossed all the school to go to Helen. Her best friend was on her bed. She met his friend and they spoke a lot of time together . Helen said what she was going to die but Jane didn’t understand of what she spoke. They spoke a lot of time and Jane fall asleep in the bed’s Helen . At the morning , Jane awoke and Helen was dead. The illness had killed his girlfriend. So, Jane felt alone but he had always her friend Miss Temple who was the last person at who she could speak.

She was very exited to leave her school. She packed her bags and she had left at four o’clock Lowood. She arrived at Milcott at eight o’clock en the evening of the same day. That was a little industrial town . She took a bedroom in a hotel . The next day, she met a man who waited her to go to the Fairfax’s house. Fairfax was her new employer. She lived in Thornfield. During the way, she was afraid to understand a woman like Mme Reed who was very rich but who wasn’t sympathetic with her. She arrived at the Fairfax’s House and she saw a very beautiful house. She understand Mme Fairfax in a beautiful and comfortable bedroom. Mme Fairfax was smiling and she looks to Jane . Jane understood a very sympathetic woman. She was old, rich and very friendly. Jane will be the teacher of a student but she wasn’t of the Fairfax’ family .

moi je dis B2o

c´est plein de faute mec

c´est plin de fautes mais crève si tu crois que je vais te le faire.
déjà mes devoir me casse les couilles alors je vais pas faire les tiens
tu me remercieras plus tard

si tu fais ma compo de philo pour vendredi, je te fait ton Anglais

je veux bien faire ton anglais, si tu fais ma dissert d´économie sur le sujet suivant:

"les salaires sont ils trop bas en France???Si oui, comment faire pour les remonter??quelles serait les conséquances de cette montée???vous nuancerez vos propos???"

4 pages écrites en tout petit, donc 5 pages stp