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Memories of Unbreatshable cell [fic]

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 22:42:43

bon j´ai vu que tout le monde veut publier quelque chose de ce genre bein voii un exemple de mes écritures:

ALEN DREATH
Memories of the Unbreachable cell

3E422 year of Mara
TIRDAS- the Dragon Throne Hall

"remove his chains Lestius,Dunmers with sharp toungs are not suited for iron and steel" said Empror Uriel Septim son of Pelgius with his long echoed soft voice
"sire,this one should be casted down to oblivion itself;for what he´ve done it´s no..."
"the chains ,Lestius,for what he´ve done we shall be well warned..."
"A..as you,command sire"
the imperial guardsman knelt removing the rusty chains from the blue legs of the Dunmer while another took care of removing those of his hands
"my ...my i guess it´s another rather sepcial treatment of favor that i do have the honor to be entrusted with from your kind and royal spirit my Empror"
"SILENCE... you filthy dog let me remind that you´re in the very presence of Tameriel´s ruler ...keep your tongue behind your teeth..."shrieked the high chancellor Ocato with wide opened eyes of fury; the Dunmer knelt before the chancellor with a nasty smile on his blue sharp edged face;his eyes did´nt left the sight of Uriel Septim´s face

"my full respect high chancellor ..his highness will excuse Valen Dreth´s words for i was´nt awed by such presence for the mere years of my short life i did not wanted but to show how faithful i am towards my emperor"

"a fainted star...a marked destiny...swims in anger...confusion...and the fear of the void ...as exactly as i had thought...you might keep your respect for your humble faith for i am not here to award your loyalty nor your trust...you...i´ve seen much of the likes of you getting astray for ages to come with no sparkles of hope in their skies...
but shall my heart will not be without pity" ending those words the Empror took his long breath as his lips whispered some unheard words

"i am to deal with you... shall your little wisdom that guide your tongue to such speeches be in your aid "said the Empror with a deep voice of a lord

"i´am still yours to command ,sire" whispered Valen Dreath

"you shall be jailed,for what purpose? that i will be not the one to care
it´s for the gods to forgive;for how long? that i will be not the one to know for this is up to you to decide..."

"sire..how.."the Chancellor interrupt his words as the Emperor rose his right hand claiming silence and obedience

"you shall be jailed in my of cell beneath the prison tower,and i will not care how long you will be in there ...the gods will grant you their forgiveness or send for their avenger;if you get out before the time of the next falling star your freedom will be the forgiveness of the gods and i shall not interfere with their judgment and you be free of guardsmen and my authority for none authority shall be beyond the will of gods
if you fail...your stat will be forfeit and for unnumbered years i will defer to the wrath of your judges...what say you... fainted star"

"a fair deal your highness...for years to come Tamriel shall not forget the name of Valen Dreath the one who escaped from the Imperial darken prison..."

"Lestius...the fainted star have judged itself worthy of your hospitable cells"said the emperor from behind his guardsmen before he ´ve risen from the Dragon throne and left the great imperial hall to his private quarters

the remaining guards formed up before escorting the dunmer under good caution ;O cato ,the high chancellor,exchanged good glances of a understandable meaning with Lestius

"high chancellor ;s should i?!"...asked lestius with a hardened voice
"the Emperor made himself clear Lestius ,Valent Dreath is nothing but a fainted star just make sure that it´ll a dying one soon enough"
"as you command lord" lestius left the dragon throne hall with an echoed
footsteps

Tirdas-IMPERIAL PRISON

"how this looks to you,a good sight isn´t it ...yes ..yes you will be close friend with those dark wall dear Valen... i assure you..."said Lestius with a great smile drawn of his face absorbed in the darkness of the downstairs cells

"i will get out you filthy dog ,i don´t know how i ´ve kept my self too much before the emperor by i seems that i know now how you are doing so well nwith your remarkable stupidity...i would not step foot in here if it was´nt for the wisdom of your leader..."said Valen with a more deeper and vengeful smile

"get out? i will be too amazed...any way this cell is all yours keep your tongue sharp and w´ll see how long it will take before it can make a good hole in these walls..Nihahahahahahaah...enjoy your stay ...and by the way
Adameus Phillada sends his regards..."

"you..dog... i shall feast on your flesh wait ´till i get out"shouted Valen as Lestius and His guards left the cell to stair and closed every gate behind them

"a good walls... i geuss it won´t be easy through walls ehh.."thinked Valen
he made few rounds in the his small cell the walls were indeed of rock stone cold and mighty not even a small scratch of a former resident ;a rotten stone made cube with no t even a hole of window that would pass even a shadowy breath of air
he´ve shaken the iron bars oh the cell´s gate not an inch he could move it
the gate well lucked were heaviest than the thought as they were made of the ebony not iron
but he did not gave up he tried so many times than he could even remember
with each passing day the ties of his hope were losing their strength
he noticed that the cell was made to be effectively unbreatshable
no matter what he tried the gate remained unbreakable it was heavier than the nasty smiles of the his jailor
as the days passed down one after another the smile of the jailor was growing even larger ;V alen lost his cold temper for so long already
his madness could´nt decipher that smile

"are they playing with my mind it´s not cruelty for i´ve grown up reconzing the cruel and the mad it´s something else ;i ´am not at the end of my rope yet;it´s not the end of Valen Dreath even the delay i was guarned is near ending ´i am not yet..."he whispered

3E433 YEAR OF AKATOSH
SUNDUS-IMPERIAL PRISON

"it´s over Dreath...it seems that you rot in here for the two remaining years of your miserable life of jail dont you happy? the empror ´s words were right ehh...the guards of his lordship will soon bring you one that should keep you company ´till their ...dont say that we didnt loved you ehh..."said the jailor with the same smile of the bloody vampire

"ahh i ´ve should known that you are preparing somthing for me i knew i could have more fun than the monkeys and dogs to keep me busy in charming little cell..."

"no no you wil have real fun it your turn after all for i haven´t seen such a fun of my life time "

"fun...fun?!! you think that keeping the gates closed and the ass wet all the time is funny i envy you you have such imagination"

"no my little Valen the gate of cell IS THE FUNNY if only you kept pulling it to your side instead of pushing it; you would be a freeman for many years already;now that deal is over you shall be our guest to the final day of your miserable life...NIHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...."

Panzerchreck
Panzerchreck
Niveau 7
17 août 2007 à 22:45:34

Euh, juste par simple curiosité:
c´est toi qui l´a écris ou tu l´as copié ?
Parce que l´anglais, je veux bien, c´est original, ca donne un style mais ca laisse des doutes :-)

Si c´est toi, bah c´est bien :-)
Si c´est pas toi, bah c´est pas bien -_- .

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 22:47:38

Chacun son style camarade, mais t´aurais pas la version turk ?

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 22:47:41

je sais ça parait louche mais meme mes professuers me le disent tous
c mon anglais
je peux te faire une autre t´as qu´as choisir le sujet

darkness-stone
darkness-stone
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 22:48:45

de toute façon c´est en anglais, qui se casserai le cul a décrypter??

Panzerchreck
Panzerchreck
Niveau 7
17 août 2007 à 22:49:30

Non, je vais pas t´encombrer d´un travail supplémentaire.

Mais tu as un bon anglais écrit :-)

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 22:49:33

le turk non mais l´arabe peut etre je peux faire de mon mieux
(turk :doute: ) TI SOUR KE TOU COMPREN LE TURK TOI?!

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 22:54:49

Non, je me limite à l´anglais dans ses bases les + profondes mais je pense que si tu nous traduisais cette fic en Francais ça pourrai être interressant.

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 22:59:21

bon si vous voulez

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 23:01:11

Tant qu´a faire, c´est déja compliqué en francais pour certain.....

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 23:03:47

:rire:
je sais j´ai déja connu des trilobites et je compte en faire un champs
d´étude rien qu´à partir de ce forum

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 23:06:54

Hum trilobites t´es negatif là...Bon courage.

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 23:07:55

:gni:

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 23:13:20

non c pas ce que tu crois c juste un point de vue
lorsque tu dois lutter contre un QI qui tend vers -infini tel une fonction logarithm

négatif? non neutre...Hum ´accord si tu le dis.... "Negatif"!!!

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 23:14:24

:rire2:

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 23:16:49

Sans géneraliser. Envois le texte en francais car mon tradusteur Coogle fait la gueule.

darkness-stone
darkness-stone
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 23:18:51

certaine personne on du mal en français alors en anglais

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 23:19:58

pourquoi tiens tu vraiment à le lire?
eh bien disons que ça prendras du temps
mais j´aimerais bien avoir TON traduction avant

CaptainCaverne
CaptainCaverne
Niveau 19
17 août 2007 à 23:20:06

Moi par exemple....

silvermouth
silvermouth
Niveau 10
17 août 2007 à 23:22:15

non sans déc...faite un effort

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