Alors voilà, j'ai besoin de votre aide pour compter les erreurs (grammaire, vocabulaire, syntaxe, etc.) dans un texte (d'environ 200 mots) que je dois rédiger en anglais.

Je dois écrire une lettre à mon modèle (star, par exemple).
d'avance

Dear Mr John,

My name is AbuIshaq (:hap:), and I'm seventeen years old. I live in Paris, France and I am a huge fan of yours. I'm writing to you because I have a lot of questions to ask you. I always wanted to meet you. But I wonder what I can tell you. I've see all your movies, excluding the last because I'm too young. And everytime, I don't see you but the character who you're playing. I wonder if I dare ask you an autograph, an encouragement or simply an answer. I am aware of the recent accusations against you, but as you biggest fan, I trust you. I want to tell you that you were excellent in all your movies and I know you'll be it in your upcomings movies. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my letter, and best of luck to you in the future! I know great things lie ahead for you. I hope to meet you a day, even if it's just for a selfie or an autograph and I give my love to you.

Best wishes,

Bon, je suis une quiche en anglais, donc y'a plusieurs passage ou je ne dis rien car je suis pas sur du tout.

I've seeN
excluding the last one*
as your biggest*
i hope to meet you a day me semble bizarre, j'aurai mis one day.

Sinon je pense que y'a un problème au niveau de la concordance des temps, quand tu utilises "if" et "wonder"

Je te laisse chercher les règles de conjugaison sur internet

Merci de ta réponse !
D'autres coquilles ?

Well excuse me broski, if you're so smart then go ahead correct me if I'm wrong

Thanks you very much for your help.