Je cherche quelqu'un fort en anglais pour qui puisse m'aider à corriger les fautes d'un texte anglais que j'ai écrit , il y a 15 ligne +,- en tous .
merci d'avance
T'as qu'à poster directement sur le topic, c'est pas comme si ton prof allait checker internet.
(Et quand bien même il le ferait, il verrait justement que le texte est bien de toi, en se fiant à la date)
The solar tower, the future project of ENVIROMISION which had a construction license in the Texas state. It will provide 200 (two hundred) megaton power electricity that can supply renewable energy. To more than 100 000 (one hundred thousands) American households or remove the equivalent of 220 000 (two hundred and twenty thousand) or in another way motor vehicles for the roads. 1 000 000 (one million) ton of greenhouse gases per year are will remove
A larger area collects and warms a greater volume of air to flow up the chimney collectors areas as large as 7 (seven) kilometers diameter. A larger chimney height increases the pressure difference on the stack effect chimney as tall as 1000 (one thousand) meters.
The chimney will be equipped with an elevator that allow people to climb up of the landscape from 1000 (one meters) of ground. The amazing ingenuity of man. The construction will take 2 (two) years and will cost an estimated 670 (six hundred and seventy million) dollars.
When the sunset begin, the temperature of collectors decreases gently and the tower will enlightened with the energies produce during the day.
The control building is (500) five hundred meters from the tower that can the worker see and inspect in case of anomaly
When the sunrise begins, the collectors begin to heat. The tubes heated by sunlight during the days well that convert solar energy directly into electricity.
The company estimates that the suction would create a 5 (thirty five) mph (miles per hour) or 56 (fifty six) km/h (kilometers per hour) updraft that to supply 32 (thirty two) turbines.
The company argues that an expected life span of 100 (one hundred) year the system. If this system is widespread, the pollution in world will be revised down
alors?
eh oui c'est pour me dire où sont les fautes
c'est un copié collé depuis word
Fais attention, une partie de ton texte vient directement d'un article wikipédia. Si j'ai pu le voir, ton prof le pourra aussi.