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nikks
- Posté le
11 juin 2006 à 15:43:47

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bjr a tous , voila j´aimerais que qqn me dise si mn texte est correct , fait dans un " bon anglais" et me dire les fautes que j´ai faites . merci!
i would like you present my favorite sport : soccer .
i play soccer since i´ve 8 years old , for me this sport is the most complete physically .
this sport is played with 2 teams and 22 players
the soccer is the most beautiful sport in the world for me and for many people.
now is the world cup , in germany , is the most bigger competition after the olympic games there are 32 country !
the soccer was be create by english in 1863
i play soccer in my city since i´ve 8 years old , i´m goalkeeper .
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Fox2001
- Posté le
11 juin 2006 à 15:47:40

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J´ai ans = I am 8 (y-o).
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PaRkKuS
- Posté le
11 juin 2006 à 16:03:38

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Pour "vous présenter" c´est I would like to introduce you my favorite sport"
"the soccer is the most...",
Je dirai "Soccer is..."
most bigger = biggest
"the soccer was be create by english in 1863"
Soccer was created by the english
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adriano06
- Posté le
11 juin 2006 à 17:57:18

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"is the most bigger competition"
==> It´s the most...
"there are 32 country !"
==> there are 32 countries"
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